
How to plan the wedding decoration?
Every girls would dream of a beautiful wedding. This is a matter of great importance in life. I am a designer of flower arranging. I am glad to share my experience to you. How to plan the wedding decoration?
First the couple and designer must talk about the form of wedding decoration, for example, romantic, stately, lovely, etc, and what kind of flowers, colors which they are preferred. Next the wedding process, details must be disscussed and the budget confirmed.
Then, the designer should visit the wedding-place and check of decorative detail, for example, ceiling, platform, aisle, garden banister, arch, etc. After this, the designer drews up plans for decoration. Next the couple and designer must decide the design and budget.
Order the flower and decorations before a week of wedding. Wedding decoration and wedding rehearsal must be completed the day before the wedding.
Finally, enjoy a wonderful wedding celebration.

1 Comments:
Good job! Be careful with the passive verb form!
祈使句 被動 主動語態可以交換使用 以增加句子的多樣性.
Must, should 之後的動詞應是原型動詞
e.g. shoud be... must be discussed...must talk about...
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Every girls would dreaming of a beautiful wedding.
-->woudl dream of...
must talked about -->must talk about
Next they should be discussed about the wedding process, detail and confirmed the budget.
-->next, the wedding process, details must be disscussed and the budget confirmed.
Then, designer should be visited the wedding-place and check of decorative detail, for example, ceiling, platform, aisle, garden banister, arch, etc.
-->the designer should visit...
After this, designer is drew up plans for decoration. Next the couple and designer must decide the design and budget.
-->the designer draws up
Wedding decoration the previous day. And wedding rehearsal the previous day night.
-->Rewrite these two sentences into complete sentences!
Finally, what are a wonderful wedding celebration.
-->...enjoy a wonderful wedding celebratoin.
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