In life rainbow- Ann
Becoming a university student is not my plan. When I married five years ago, I wanted to stop working which that must have often to work overtime. I just wanted to become a mother .I very loved children. When I suspended the work. I have joined a growth association-Rainbow Family. This is care for child's association by the Life Education curriculum. I like those curricula very much, especially related counselling and psychotherapy. First, because of this, I am willing as a student again. Stuyding language is the first step.
I thank my husband for his support. He is my good friend, also is the match for quarrels. He is a patient person, and he has completed many impossible tasks.I am happy that he is my partner.At our wedding ceremony, the pastor encouraged us with the words:'Two people working togehter is better than one person struggling alone. ' So we are not alone, we grow for each other.
In Holy Bible, it says: we are made a spectacle unto the world, and to angels, and to men.For me the life has its duty. This mission is from God. We must complete this duty with all our heart. At present we do not have any chdilren. THere are alrady many children who have not received good care in the world I am not sure whether we are going to have our own child.I believe children are an heritage of the Lord. In a wonderful time, God's blessing can arrive. But now is my time, yoyo go go go!
Church's children, our student- outdoors sketch
posted by yoyo @ 6:11 AM
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Hello Ann
Well doen! Here are some suggestions for you:
1. Become a university student is not my plan.
-->Becoming ...
2.When i married Five years ago,that time I want to stop the work which that must have often to work overtime.
-->When I married five years ago, I wanted to stop working.
3. I just want to become a mother .I very love children. When I suspended the work. I have joined a growth association-Rainbow Family.
-->past tense
4.This is care for child's association by the Life Education curriculum. I very like those curricula, especially related counselling and psychotherapy.
->I like...very much
5. First, because liking these, I am willing as a student again, and study language this is the first step.
-->because of this, ...again. Stuyding language is the first step.
6.I thanks my husband to my support.
-->I thank my husband for his support.
7.He is my good friend, also is the match for quarrels. He has the patience person, and he has completed many impossible tasks.
-->He is a patient person...
8.I am happiness that he is my partner.When our wedding ceremony, the pastor encourages us: Two people have wanted are better than one person.
-->I am happy that.... At our wedding ceremony,the pastor encouraged us with the words: 'Two people working togehter is better than one person struggling alone. ' (I am not very sure what you mean here)
9. I thought the life like drama, Holy Bible also to say: we are made a spectacle unto the world, and to angels, and to men.
-->like is like a drama. In Holy Bible, it says:... (not very clear what it means here)
10. For me the life has duty, this mission is comes from the God, we must complete with all heart.
-->life has its duty. This mission is from god. We must complete this duty with all our heart.
11. At present we do not have child, many children have not received good care in the world, I am indefinite whether have own child.
-->...we do not have any chdilren. THere are alrady many children who ... I am not sure whenther we are going to have our own child.
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