
Diagram
General used of mobile phone
Other brands of mobile phone comprise the remaining 15.2 %.
Nokia comprises 28.3% of General used of mobile phone.
Motorola comprises 17.4% of General used of mobile phone.
Ericsson comprises 15.2% of General used of mobile phone.
Siemens comprises 13% of General used of mobile phone.
Philips comprises 10.9% of General used of mobile phone.
Nokia is the most commonly used of mobile phone.

1 Comments:
General used.
-->general use
Nokia is the most commonly used of mobile phone
-->delete 'of'
Well done!
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