Monday, June 25, 2007




Diagram

General used of mobile phone

The 5 main mobile phone brands of Nokia, Motorola, Ericsson, Siemens and Philips make up 84.8% of General used.
Other brands of mobile phone comprise the remaining 15.2 %.
Nokia comprises 28.3% of General used of mobile phone.
Motorola comprises 17.4% of General used of mobile phone.
Ericsson comprises 15.2% of General used of mobile phone.
Siemens comprises 13% of General used of mobile phone.
Philips comprises 10.9% of General used of mobile phone.
Nokia is the most commonly used of mobile phone.


1 Comments:

At 1:16 AM, Blogger Yuhsiuwriting said...

General used.
-->general use

Nokia is the most commonly used of mobile phone
-->delete 'of'


Well done!

You can add variety to the sentences by using different expressions: account for, make up, constitute, etc.

 

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